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Thursday, March 12, 2009

In the holidays I went to the beach with my sister and parents. When we got there we went running to the beach. We had a rugby ball, we passed it around and around. I was playing with my aunty. I sprinted and caught the ball. Suddenly I dodged her and got the try. After we went to eat popcorn and chips. Then we went to swim again.

7 comments:

  1. Great to see you got your animation and story finished Marven. It looks fantastic. So what are you going to write about next??? I am looking forward to reading your next post.

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  2. Hi Marven,
    You have written a good story, I like the part where you tell of how you 'dodged' your Aunty, I can imagine you making a side step.

    I like your animation, your drawing and animation skills are improving all the time.

    Malo lava Marven, taumafai pea!

    Mrs Tele'a

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  3. Hi Maven

    WOW!!! That would of been fun your Movie looked great and how you put alot of interesting words in it...

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  4. Nice movie you go their but your legs are taotlly cool do you real play rugby a. Casey Erene

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  5. You have a taodly cool movie man teach how to do it . By Casey

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  6. Hi Marven.
    I like your movie.
    By Ilalio

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