tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2743497198080290639.post8318691573170302790..comments2013-09-25T10:51:10.266+12:00Comments on Marven: Favorites.PES Blog Archivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03346754417165409248noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2743497198080290639.post-29415077008144924432011-09-13T21:03:48.882+12:002011-09-13T21:03:48.882+12:00I love the way you have worked hard to try and rec...I love the way you have worked hard to try and recraft this Marven. You even managed to include some alliteration, well done. I think you could still do some tweaking. Reread it aloud and keep recrafting, that's what great writers do!<br />Mrs NuaToni Nuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06403667208848431253noreply@blogger.com